Un commento il “#45 A Haiku by Rachel Sutliffe, 2017 April 25th

  1. Alan Summers

    Great haiku. I can relate. During hospital treatments it was extraordinary how many couldn’t find my veins, yet one or two managed straightaway. Good thing I am not squeamish about syringes missing their mark.

    Great opening line and I like the ‘delayed’ alliteration of vines and veins.

    warm regards,
    Alan

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