4 comments on “#65 A Haiku by Steven Smolak, September 6th, 2017

  1. I loved this moment. The poem I was reading could only be distracted by a thing of beauty, just as when I encountered the woman I love– the long comma of her charms and beauty. There wasn’t a single thing wrong with us in that moment; it was eternity…
    I want to tell her that time is a figment of our imaginations, that it is only gravity. I want to examine the one thing worth examining together, and hold onto the only thing that is real…
    .
    a break in the rain . . .
    knowing we’ll never reach it
    we run for the rainbow

    1. Dear Steve, thank you for your lovely words. She is lucky!
      I see what you want to convey with the final ‘break in the rain’… But personally I think I would rather connect to my everyday-rainbow instead of thinking it is just an illusion to pursuit in some not well known future …. Thank you again for submitting and I hope you will again…!
      Lucia

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